Thursday, May 21, 2009

VCOP - Writing

In writing this week we have been looking at openers and connectives and how we can use them effectively in our report writing.
Today we read through Liam's fantastic report on in-line skates (a work in progress). We identified the openers and connectives he used in his report. We were really impressed with the connectives he used. We gave him some feedback on using a variety of openers to start his sentences.

We were all really impressed with his report - Keep up the great work Liam!!

5 comments:

Andrew Bird said...

Brilliant work Stu. Well done Liam - I am most impressed with you work.

Anonymous said...

Nice work Liam well done

Mr D said...

great wow cool amazing I am just


speechlees.



by louis sutherland and liam

Mr D said...

great wow cool amazing I am just


speechlees.



by louis sutherland and liam

Anonymous said...

Great report Liam, very informative, I am impressed! Mum